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发表于 2023-8-8 16:00:10 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
Hi [recipient's name],
I hope this email finds you well.
I'm writing to you today to request your feedback on my recent presentation on the new product launch. I'm particularly interested in hearing your thoughts on the following:
What did you like most about the presentation?
What could I have done to improve the presentation?

Do you have any suggestions for how I can improve my presentations in the future?
I'd be grateful for your feedback. I've attached a link to a survey where you can share your thoughts.
Thank you for your time.
Sincerely,
[Your name]
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Active voice: I wrote the letter.
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The active voice sentence "I wrote the letter" is correct. It puts the subject of the sentence, "I," in the driver's seat, so to speak. The verb "wrote" describes the action that the subject is doing. The sentence is also clear and concise.
Here is the passive voice version of the sentence:
The letter was written by me.



The passive voice sentence is grammatically correct, but it is not as clear or concise as the active voice sentence. The subject of the sentence, "the letter," is not doing anything. The action of the sentence is being done to the letter. This can make the sentence less engaging and interesting to read.

In general, it is better to use active voice in your writing. Active voice sentences are more engaging and easier to read. They also tend to be more concise. However, there are some cases where passive voice is appropriate. For example, you might use passive voice if you want to emphasize the receiver of the action.


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